+ What child ? I Am Borne Before During & After Always & Forever Why Child ? Yes , Speak and receive . Every Step Begins . As pollen upon the wind Unforgotten as rains drench the reaching upstart . And cries above ending find a sky full of Life ...................... Completed November 23, 2024 Saturday evening by John Edward Culp
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Poetry to me always speaks to the heart, to the mind, to the fragile sensibilities of the most vulnerable, a baby, a child, a young woman, humanity in general. I read this poem but saw my niece, a baby and my elderly father who is eighty years old. I spend the majority of my time with them these days. I think a poem is written to make us think and feel and mostly, to remember. To remember things past and what came before.
My favourite lines were: As pollen upon the/wind/Unforgotten as rains/drench the reaching/upstart/And cries above ending/find a sky full of/Life. In my own poetry, I have been writing for over four decades now, I like to include nature in my poetry and love to read other poets who do the same. This poem was relevant, topical and captivating, a combination of humanity and flora, human nature and Mother Nature. It is the instinct of the poet to heal and to write about matters and the vulnerabilities of the heart.
Thanks
There is greatness in the air
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