BAGGY GENERATION
I need no canoe to sail back into
The past, the day my grandfather
Read his adage into every growing ear
Only a puzzle in my brain, & this all
Would re-appear in fresh flesh
We grew up with this adage becoming
The owner of our heart-
The okra herb never duels for height
With its cocky.
As my mother’s tongue has also attested,
My mother’s mother would sew her a cloth
Of pair-able size to her petite nature-
Cutting her cloth in accord with her cloth.
Err NO for this baggy generation
A man’s shoe size is a thousand and two times
Grey-haired than his leg
Every being opine to what isn’t yet
Visible in their weak muscles
A child wants to talk before birth
And run before he crawls
A boy with two teeth is wearing the
Words of fatherhood in his mouth
The beards like scattered mop strands
Beneath the bottom of a child’s mouth
Has been robbed of the esteem of his father.
The baggy generation of
Fat clothing in big thin bodies
makes them another phrase
For a swallowed pill.
Baggy heads yet thin of sense
Everything is baggy! eyes, mind, mouth & motive
On crossed legs, this generation wants
To reach the peak of an alp.
‘A boy with two teeth is wearing the
Words of fatherhood in his mouth’
fantastic imagery like this makes me feel young again, then old, then . . .
a circle forms as i peer from a mountaintop down into a smokey
valley filled with former selves . . .
Thank you so much
Wow.i love this
Keep it up bro.
Thank you so much
Aww 🥰 I like it..
Keep it up
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The okra herb is an important image to lots of peoples around the world. Good allusion to connect with them.
The boy with two teeth and the words of fatherhood is great character. I think a lot of the people in this poem could be characters in flash fiction – even for other writers who quote and link to it! 🙂
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