Seasoned ritual
What these lights exclaim—
a commonplace of forms
in pronouncement of death.
They wander untruths
hollered foregone
of a solstice
established
a season of touch.
Their dross is predicate
to a remonstrance performed;
shaping as best
that fathom of force cultured
from specks unjustness shines
on bathed nights lacked their lustre.
(Here a life extolled; there
a dream extinguished).
Now so foreign we’re
stepping over the timed-in chants
to fend for places consenting
rest from
what reasons that ask it
of celebrations intolerance begets,
that is how to exercise rhythms
their shod worthiness proclaimed
in the sudden redux of antiphons
once scant now abundant.
We trail in our responses,
aligned to make delicate
the occasion we’ve met,
clutching our tapers so that
light, too, does not
more easily perish.
Window shopping
Cut figures shaped waxen
mirror intentions formed
of haphazard strolls down streets
love ill-mannered pretends them—
some ticketed green
of truant devotions come back this
garden of delights popular in what’s hoped for.
Most of it’s distracting, full of
stops and contrition
unripe statuary tends
those whose lives unfold
in service to lost ancestors.
But Time will come them who favour
this will to remark it—
we’re selves left as are to own devices
happenstance if birth
then recession cemented along
lines that dock us of valuables given.
Ready or not we wouldn’t have it
that smile half-shaped for the crowd to mumble,
a relic ambulating distance and emotion
the window gives toll to
as we gather and shop in the know
of what it’s wrought
an age post-capitalistic of booming abundance.
On a reading of Melanie Klein during lockdown
Projected selfhoods applaud
affirmations to the bone;
deep their solipsism broods
the selfishness they’ve caused
if wrapped around is a gift
their Others’ not wanted
but of loans disposed
to hearts who contend them.
They ride along
such subtle devotion
its violence that prospers
raw conditions suffering made norm
as Life is its truth when
pretensions implode
and grumble the heresies
politeness helps form
in softness mere cover
what tensions belie.
Avatar
Legitimate runs can’t handle
circumstances of commotion.
They get wind of escape through
worlds our falsehoods outmoding
as the real less tangible is speculated
more worth than this
daily plot thick
with the uninitiated.
But here:
burnt-out traces of corpse
project drop-offs
the mainframed redoubt-in,
lost to bigger cause
inhuman as much
the next one proposes
some new god its hereafters
the digital allots of
when embraced extensions
regulate newness pulled-out from
deathbeds their visions
that commonplace of norms
our postmodern living.
Monotony gone
deposits best colour
this mutiny
about us.
2 thoughts on “Poetry from Andrew McDonald”
Beautifully written! Delicately constructed and simultaneously tender and powerful.
Beautifully written! Delicately constructed and simultaneously tender and powerful.
Many thanks for this kind response!