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WALKING Water
Support my feet
Looks like Liquid
feels like street
I'm Heart filled Dreaming
I could go Home
But Bring Here Heaven
just now on loan
LOVE lift my thought
Above Being tried
As STEPS ON Liquid
are not denied
WALKING Water
Support my feet
Looks like Liquid
feels like street
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by John Edward Culp
Saturday Morning
February 18, 2017
My favorite passage from the Bible, after the Resurrection, is the story of when Peter briefly walked on water before doubting and beginning to sink. So I really liked your poem. It powerfully evoked the Gospel story. My only complaint is that I wanted more. I think you could write a longer poem on this theme and it would be great. I’m a little partial to the Peter walks on water story. I go into it in depth in my story, The Crucifixion of Saint Peter, which you can read on Foreshadow Magazine 2022.
My Friend,
You have planted a seed. I don’t know it will take root. How can I know, the Love begins new every day. I have opened my hand. Your preference has a sky waiting to fill.
John♡